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Postby z4m97 » Fri Dec 05, 2014 6:54 pm

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ok so i finally decided to do an sketchbook, sadly for y'all, these are my first attempts on inks so theyre bad as hell xD
hehe anyway here they are, hope you guys enjoy and leave some feedback :D
most of them are re-drawn from older stuff i did, and on that epoch i had some sort of...obsession with catgirls xD

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Postby ErnieTheMighty » Fri Dec 05, 2014 7:02 pm

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I would prefer to see images, not errors. :D

 

Postby z4m97 » Fri Dec 05, 2014 7:04 pm

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ErnieTheMighty wrote:I would prefer to see images, not errors. :D

:x me too but ive just been on inks like 2 days T^T

 

Postby ErnieTheMighty » Fri Dec 05, 2014 7:06 pm

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That's not what I meant. You're posting errored images, I see no images because it doesn't have .jpg(etc.) ending in them. Right click the actual image and copy its URL and put it in here. <3

 

Postby z4m97 » Fri Dec 05, 2014 7:09 pm

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whaaaaa????? i didnt noticed i can see them on my pc...
let me check and repost them

 

Postby z4m97 » Fri Dec 05, 2014 7:12 pm

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better?

 

Postby ErnieTheMighty » Fri Dec 05, 2014 7:13 pm

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Yep! I can see it now! <3 <3 cute stuff

also, no need of spoiler tag. we come here for art, not text XD

 

Postby z4m97 » Fri Dec 05, 2014 7:16 pm

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ErnieTheMighty wrote:Yep! I can see it now! <3 <3 cute stuff

also, no need of spoiler tag. we come here for art, not text XD

yeahhhh but that way te images dont load and the side scroll bar dont run away from the mouse...also i like the spoiler tag xD

 

Postby HaiLin » Fri Dec 05, 2014 11:07 pm

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Really cute drawings you got here, awesome work.

 

Postby z4m97 » Sat Dec 06, 2014 12:56 am

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HaiLin wrote:Really cute drawings you got here, awesome work.

thx a lot :D

 

Postby LuisEC » Sat Dec 06, 2014 6:23 am

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nice clean linework and fun expressiveness in the drawings! The oversized heads do work but I think you're making them a touch too big so as it starts to look a bit unwieldy. The catgirl's rear arm's perspective isn't really work right now it just kind of feels like its a shorter arm, i think you need the bicep to be longer rather than the forearm.

The position of the far eye on those 3/4 faces is a bit confusing. It seems like some of hte other side of the nose is visible, so the features seem like they should be facing toward us slightly more, the eyes seem to be going in a different perspective. This could also be that there's no zygomatic dip under the eye, in the 3/4 view the eye is pretty much right at the edge of the face, and the bones of the face will curve in there, then curve back out for the brow ridge. If you can see that "edge" at the far side of the face, then the features wouldn't be so turned away from us.

I really do like the linework though, the hatching is wonderful :)

 

Postby z4m97 » Sat Dec 06, 2014 7:06 am

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LuisEC wrote:nice clean linework and fun expressiveness in the drawings! The oversized heads do work but I think you're making them a touch too big so as it starts to look a bit unwieldy. The catgirl's rear arm's perspective isn't really work right now it just kind of feels like its a shorter arm, i think you need the bicep to be longer rather than the forearm.

The position of the far eye on those 3/4 faces is a bit confusing. It seems like some of hte other side of the nose is visible, so the features seem like they should be facing toward us slightly more, the eyes seem to be going in a different perspective. This could also be that there's no zygomatic dip under the eye, in the 3/4 view the eye is pretty much right at the edge of the face, and the bones of the face will curve in there, then curve back out for the brow ridge. If you can see that "edge" at the far side of the face, then the features wouldn't be so turned away from us.

I really do like the linework though, the hatching is wonderful :)

yeah people just started talking about my heads and they kinda look oversized ._. idk why i didnt noticed before
the arm i didnt noticed it even tho i think youre right, sometimes happens
yeah i know the issue with faces im trying to correct it but its really hard, im used to do semirealistic 3/4 faces, so i tried with what you said and do it anatomically correct, but in anime style it looks awkward...so im trying to adapt some things a bit

 

Postby z4m97 » Sat Dec 06, 2014 7:44 am

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redrawing most of them, trying to get better gonna post results

 

Postby fleur » Sat Dec 06, 2014 9:34 am

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I love the expressions on these! People have already mentioned the head size, can't wait to see more :)
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Postby z4m97 » Sat Dec 06, 2014 9:44 am

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fleur wrote:I love the expressions on these! People have already mentioned the head size, can't wait to see more :)

correcting it right now, but its 2:44 am here, so ill go sleep and post tomorrow xD

 

Postby PostBoxRomance » Sat Dec 06, 2014 3:05 pm

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I really like the second image, she's adorable!

I'm looking forward to seeing more from you soon :D welcome to the forum!
My sketchbook: viewtopic.php?f=3&t=2033&start=0

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Postby Fergato » Sat Dec 06, 2014 4:57 pm

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Hi, welcome!
You have skills with ink, don't say you don't! :lol:
Our learning path never ends... Keep practicing.
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Postby z4m97 » Sat Dec 06, 2014 5:57 pm

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Fergato wrote:Hi, welcome!
You have skills with ink, don't say you don't! :lol:
PostBoxRomance wrote:I really like the second image, she's adorable!

I'm looking forward to seeing more from you soon :D welcome to the forum!

PostBoxRomance wrote:I really like the second image, she's adorable!

I'm looking forward to seeing more from you soon :D welcome to the forum!


thx everyone, yep shes adorable and yep my inks are getting better xD anyway i recieved some critiques on the size of my heads...which actually were right maybe i oversized them, so i tried to correct and do just the sketches with pencil to avoid the ink rush im used to (draw the sketch without proper care because i wanna ink xD)
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Postby z4m97 » Sat Dec 06, 2014 5:59 pm

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some 1 min sketches



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Postby axelsior » Sun Dec 07, 2014 1:44 pm

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Hey, nice sketch lines! I like how loose and relaxed they are. Your ink lines are also pretty strong too, keep going with them!

You're right about the heads though, you do draw them slightly too big sometimes, but if you like how it looks, I guess it could just be a style thing?

 

Postby ErnieTheMighty » Sun Dec 07, 2014 1:59 pm

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AWesome sketchlings <333333

 

Postby z4m97 » Sun Dec 07, 2014 5:27 pm

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axelsior wrote:Hey, nice sketch lines! I like how loose and relaxed they are. Your ink lines are also pretty strong too, keep going with them!

You're right about the heads though, you do draw them slightly too big sometimes, but if you like how it looks, I guess it could just be a style thing?

hey, thx budd, ill keep going with inks and loos sketches xD
and yeah the heads are bit too big, but ill correct thm i dont like it i think its a mistake xD

 

Postby z4m97 » Sun Dec 07, 2014 5:27 pm

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ErnieTheMighty wrote:AWesome sketchlings <333333

thanks ernie :D

 

Postby HaiLin » Sun Dec 07, 2014 6:41 pm

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Very lively and expresive sketches and cute as always :D

 

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z4m97 wrote:
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Coool.....
I sure hope this isn't Chris's sandwich.
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